Sunday, September 20, 2015

Story

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Anabell. Anabell had a big oak tree. Every day she would swing on the oak tree and that tree would smile. That's right, it was a magic oak tree. One day Anabell went to the mall and the oak tree was alone. Anabell saw her archenemy at the mall. Her name was Susan and she hated the oak tree that Anabell had because she was jealous. She vowed that one day she would chop it down. When Anabell came home she saw the tree was cut down. She cried and cried and cried. There was only one explanation for this. Susan. She didnt know what to do exept call Susan and ask her why she did it. Susan said, " I didn't do it but if I did, I would be proud of telling you I did it." She wondered who could've done it...

1 comment:

  1. Your story was very well written and it has very good grammar. You explained this story very well.

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